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- Part1
1, 2¹ø¹®Á¦ ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ½ºÅ©¸³Æ®¸¦ ±×´ë·Î ÀÐÀ¸¸é µÇ´Â ÆÄÆ®ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. f/p µîÀÇ ¹ßÀ½, xxx, xxx and xxx µîÀÇ ¹ßÀ½ ³ô³·ÀÌ µî ½Å°æ¾²¸é¼ ¹®Á¦¾øÀÌ ¸»Çß½À´Ï´Ù. ¾Æ¹«·¡µµ Å©°Ô ¾î·Á¿î ÆÄÆ®´Â ¾Æ´Ï¾ú¾î¿ä.
- Part2
3¹ø¹®Á¦ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ¾îÈÞ... ¼³¸íÇÒ°Ô ¸¹ÀÌ ¾Èº¸¿©¼ ´çȲÇß¾ú³×¿ä. ÀÏ´Ü ÁÂÃøÀÇ »ç¶÷ÀÇ Çൿ°ú ÀÔÀº ¿Ê, ¸Ó¸®»ö µîÀ» ¼³¸íÇÏ°í µÞÂÊÀÇ Ã¢¹®°ú °è´Ü ±×¸®°í °è´Ü¿¡¼ ³»·Á¿À°íÀÖ´Â »ç¶÷ÀÇ Çൿ°ú ÀλóÂøÀǸ¦ ¼³¸íÇß½À´Ï´Ù. ¿©±â¼ ¼³¸íÇҰŸ®¸¦ Àß ¸ø ãÀº ³ª¸ÓÁö â¹®°ú °è´Ü¿¡ Áߺ¹µÈ Ç¥ÇöÀ» Çß¾î¿ä. ~~~ has a very interesting design À» ¸»ÀÌÁÒ.. ÇÏ´ÃÀÌ º¸À̰ųª ¸¹Àº ºôµùÀ̳ª ³ª¹«°¡ ÀÖ¾úÀ¸¸é ³¯¾¾³ª ³ª¹«¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ¼³¸í(There are some trees with plenty of braches)À» ÇÏ¸é¼ Ç³ºÎÇÏ°Ô ¹®ÀåÀ» ¸»ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ¾úÀ»ÅÙµ¥ ÀÌ°Ç Á» ¾Æ½¬¿ü½À´Ï´Ù. ¤Ð¤Ð. ¾Æ½¬¿ö ÇÒ Æ´ÀÌ ¾ø½À´Ï´Ù. ¹Ù·Î Part3ÀÇ DescriptionÀÌ ³ª¿À±â ¶§¹®ÀÌÁö¿ä..
- Part3
Áý ÀÓ´ë? °ü·ÃµÈ ÁÖÁ¦°¡ ³ª¿Ô¾î¿ä. »ý¼ÒÇÑ ÁÖÁ¦¶ó¼ »ì¦ ´çȲÇßÁö¸¸ ÁýÁßÇØ¼ ¹®Á¦¸¦ µé°í º¼ Áغñ¸¦ Çß½À´Ï´Ù.
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- Part4
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- Part5
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- Part6
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