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[IELTSı] Ѵ Writing 5.5-> 6.5 ı
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ķ۽ 6.5+ չ (Academic)
̿ ڽ writing ̾.
Dz (, ) н ͼߴͶ,
ϼϴ Ϳ Ҿ Ǿϴ,
Jen Ǹ ûϰ Ǿµ,
ð ۼ ˷ּż
..!! ̶ ߽ϴ.
п ϱ ͳݿ ãƺ鼭
̰ ...? η ռµ, ǥ ´
ϱ н , θ ־ϴ.
Բ Ͻ α翡 ִ ǥ ū Ǿϴ.
( ü ʹ ؼ ͵ ڷ ߰ ڽ ϰ ִµ,
ó е ζ ڷ ͵Ͻñ õ帳ϴ.)
ó ų, ܱⰣ ȿ ʿϽ е鲲 õ帳ϴ..!
Ư Բ , ÷ ̼ż
л Ǽ ̸ ؼ ۼ ֵ ð ̵带 ֽôµ,
ۼϸ鼭 κ ؾ...! 鼭 Ǽ ϴµ ˴ϴ.
÷ , ּż ߽ϴ!
ϰ θ ϴ ̹ ƽ ̿...
Ͻô е鲲 õص帮
ī ˰ڽϴ մϴ!
ȣ | ۾ | ȸ | ¥ | |
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16716 | [] λ ù 10ϸ IH Ǭ | 3499 | 2023.07.27 21:56 | |
16715 | [ͽŷ] ˸.. ̽ AL ϴ Ф [1] | 2993 | 2023.07.27 14:46 | |
16714 | [] [ı] Ŭ̽ 2ָ IHҽϴ! | 2783 | 2023.07.27 14:38 | |
16713 | [] Liam , ð̾ϴ. [1] | 2835 | 2023.07.27 06:21 | |
16712 | [] [ı] []IH | ȫ | 2965 | 2023.07.26 19:50 |
16711 | [] [ı] 6 Ϲݼ ı øϴ. [2] | 2398 | 2023.07.26 15:16 | |
16710 | [Ϻ] [JLPT N3ı] JLPT N# ߹ ı [1] | ̵ | 1879 | 2023.07.26 14:09 |
16709 | [Ϻ] [JLPT N3ı] [JLPT N3]ĸŸ Ѵ ı | ȣ | 3484 | 2023.07.26 03:25 |
16708 | [] [ı] ߱ ı [4] | ̵ | 7474 | 2023.08.16 10:53 |
16707 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] ̛ 2ָ AL ҽϴ!! [1] | Ǽ | 3213 | 2023.07.22 23:45 |
16706 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] ۶ IH ҽϴ!! [1] | μ | 3682 | 2023.07.22 21:13 |
16705 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] п 2ָ AL ߽ϴ!! [1] | μҿ | 2496 | 2023.07.22 18:20 |
16704 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] 700 10ϸ IH Ϳ Ͽ(feat. ± in ) [1] | ö | 2978 | 2023.07.22 16:26 |
16703 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] ܱⰣ AL Ҿ! [1] | ̼ۿ | 2867 | 2023.07.22 11:53 |
16702 | [ͽŷ] Say Im ı, ù AL [1] | ҹ | 3036 | 2023.07.22 00:45 |
16701 | [] [ı] 850 ! [1] | 3377 | 2023.07.21 22:28 | |
16700 | [] [ı] 뺣̽ 850 Ѵް [1] | 3651 | 2023.07.21 22:15 | |
16699 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] ù , 10ϸ AL ߽ϴ! [1] | ̽ | 2454 | 2023.07.21 18:45 |
16698 | [] [ı] 95+ õɾ Ѵ ù 99 մϴ! [1] | 13185 | 2023.07.21 16:52 | |
16697 | [ͽŷ] [ͽŷı] ̻ 2ָ IH, 150 ҽϴ! [1] | 3649 | 2023.07.21 13:28 |