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[IELTSı] Jen 6.5 ܰ ı

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ķ۽ 6.5+ IELTS Writing (13, Academic)

IELTS, WRT 7.0 ޼!

ÿ 7.0 ޾ҽϴ!!!
3 ̿ ׹ 6.0 ̻ Ͽµ ̹ ϰ ù踸 7.0 ̶ ްԵƳ׿..
Jen Բ մϴ٤̤ ó ٴ !

켱 ƴ Բ ָϰ Ʋ ° Ȯϰ ´ ° ߿ϴٰ ֽ ̿. ׷ 趧 򰥸 ̳ ⺸ Ȯϰ, ø ߽ϴ. ׻ paraphrasing ؾѴٴ ٿٿ ܾ ٲ㰡鼭 ᱹ 5.5-6.0 ޾Ҿµ, ̹趧 ƴ°͸ ޴µ ȰŰƿ. 
Task 1 ϴ ð Ʈ ǥ ܿµ ߽ϴ. ׸ ÷ ū Ȱ ƿ. ÷ 򰥷ȴ ǥ Ȯϴ ð ־ Ҿ. ص ʴ κ Բ ؼ Ȯϰ ϰ Ѿ ߰, ̷ κе ϴ ִµ Ȱ ƿ! 
Task 2 '̿ ' å 'Ÿ ̿ ' å ʻ縦 ϸ ϰ ǥ ߽ϴ. ׸ 3 å ͳݿ ִ ȵ鿡 극ν ϰ ƿ ýϴ. 


6.5 ʿ ޾ ؼ 7.0 ̻ ޴° ǥ Ǿϴ

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