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ȳϼ! ι° ôµ ʹ ڰԵ Writing 30 Գ
ʾҴµ ̷ ް ֽ ѳ մϴ.
2 ù° Ҵµ Writing 22 ͼ ... ¥ ø ⳪... Ѱ Ƴ?.. ߾µ,
ø IJϰ ܿ, ù ° + ù忡 ϰ, ù Statement + ṵ̈ ڼ ٽ ߴ ̹ ̾ ϴ.
- : ù 鼭 , ǥ . ǥ ʵµ ̷ ȭڰ ڴ°?? ϴ Ҵ ŭ ø ϼ Ƽ, ϸ ϳ ҵ µ 15̸ ߽ϴ.
, ǿܷ ⸦ ϴ Lecturer ݹƮ Ѱۿ catchϴ 찡 ִµ, ̷ Ȳ ʰ ΰ ҷִ(?) ˷̴ּ ū Ǿ. ڿ ְ տ ŷ ϰ Ҷ ߷ ... ҿ ȥ Ҷ Ű ° ʾҴµ, 忡 Ű带 Ƽ Ⱑ ߴ ־ŵ.
̶ ٽ½ , Ȱ ʰ ¦ ÷ µ äڰ ̿
- : (W 22)̶ ̹ 趧 Brainstorming ð̾. ù / Strongϰ ִ ð ˳ϰ , ð ø ̿ؼ 븸 äϴ.
ֽ ø 10 Brainstorming ϸ鼭 8 ̹ Ȯϰ, ܿϴ. ø ܿ 迡 ߴ , Body ̻ ä Word count ȮǴٺ ϴ ־ϱ.
Ư 趧 » Ƽ, ÿ ø ´ٰų ϴ Ҵµ!
̷ 100% ø ø ~~~ 丸ŭ ϼŵ ϴ.
ٿ, ø ڿ ù 缭 ? ϴ ξ ƿ!
Ҵ Model essay ̴ּٴ !
÷ȸ 1Ͽ 1 , / Model essay 鼭 ΰ Ǿ.
ϴ , ξ ϰ ǥ Ҹ ۿ Ȯ .
ִ Keyword/Thesis ߴ 忡 ߴ
⸦ ģ 1-2 ð 鿩, Keyword ִ Full sentence · ϴ ߴ Keyword ϰ ű ־. ƹ ǥ Lecturer ŭ ϰ, Model essay Lecture · Ǿ ־ŵ.
ڸ ٷ ϸ, ù ٰ ι° ...Ű ִµ... ̰ ø ? ;µ, ̸ ð 鿩 صΰ · ø ׳ ֱ⸸ ϸ Ǵ!
̷ ̰ ϰ Ǿ Դϴ
ٰ... ó 20 Ѿ ߴ ŷ 25 ° ƽѵ,
̰ ϰ ʽǷ ƾ ƿ.
ϴ ̹ Ƿµ ɰŶ Ͻϴ!
ٽѹ մϴ~~

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2664 |
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Թ 2 ù 110 մϴ!
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7341 | 2019.12.20 20:15 | |
2663 |
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߱Ϲ Ѵ ǥ!
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ȣ | 3162 | 2019.12.15 02:03 |
2662 |
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ϰ ù 93 ư~
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2158 | 2019.12.13 21:23 | |
2661 | [] ų, п ǥ մϴ ! [2] | ȿ | 4304 | 2019.11.18 23:29 |
2660 |
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̼ , Ŭ մϴ. (107)
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2820 | 2019.11.17 01:21 | |
2659 |
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ù ǥ մϴ Ф
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3882 | 2019.11.12 20:41 | |
2658 |
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103, Ʈ ھ 105 ް մϴ!
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忹 | 3642 | 2019.11.11 22:33 |
2657 |
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Թ, 98 ҽϴ!
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3821 | 2019.11.11 14:56 | |
2656 | [] ߱ ݺ, Ĺݺ ù迡 ǥ ߽ϴ [3] | 迬 | 2360 | 2019.11.10 16:23 |
2655 |
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Ѵ ϰ ù 105 մϴ
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μ | 3986 | 2019.11.04 13:43 |
2654 | [] ܰ ϰ ϴ [1] | 缮 | 1243 | 2019.11.04 11:34 |
2653 |
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/ ڰ / / Bailey մϴ.
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2637 | 2019.11.01 19:12 | |
2652 | [] չ [2] | ȣ | 2435 | 2019.10.31 01:29 |
2651 |
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Ľǹ 3ָմϴ!!!!
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̻ | 2769 | 2019.10.29 15:19 |
2650 |
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ı!!! 113 մϴ!!
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2766 | 2019.10.08 14:16 | |
2649 |
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30 ۿ 帳ϴ : )
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2319 | 2019.10.06 00:48 | |
2648 | [] ù 103 մϴ! , ų մϴ! [2] | ȫ | 2258 | 2019.10.05 14:05 |
2647 | [] 107 ҽϴ! [1] | ̿ | 1757 | 2019.10.04 11:56 |