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Ƹ ѱ л鿡 ū ٷ writing speaking ƴұ մϴ.
writing speaking ȥ ٷ ΰ ʾ ܰ ûϿ, ް ϰ 2 ġϴ.
18.09.29 迡 29/29/23/27 108 ϰ ̹ ϰ Ǿϴ.
Ʈ good Ҵµ, ƹ ؼ ü Ǯ ϴ 縵 ҳ ϴ.
ù ø ƽð writing ҽϴ.
ù 2ְ ܼ ø ܿ ߴٸ( ° ø ̼ ʾҳ ˴ϴ), 2ְ ø ȿ ° ϰ Ų ϴ ߴ ȿϰ ۿߴ ϴ.
, Բ ٵ ù Ű Ѵٰ ϼż, ܸ ִ topic off-topic ʰ 鿩 topic sentence ۼ߽ϴ. ٵ ִ ð ؼ conclusion 1常 Խϴ.
ܼ ϰ Բ ֽô θ ߽ϴ.
ø 2 ܿ(Ʈ Ÿذ), 2 1 ۼ Բ ֽô sample essay ذ ̼ ǥ ij ߽ϴ.
ù 2 ø ܿ ϱ ð Һ Ůϴ. , 2 3 ð ٱ 1~2 ø ܿñ õ帳ϴ( 3~4 ϴ, մϴ).
ް Ƚϴ !
źź ǿ л鿡 Ͽ ϷϷ Ƿ ϴ Ǿϴ!
ٽ 帮, ȯ ǰ ϼ !


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